Improve this writing: *Kyle, who was just about to confront Daisy, quickly jumps back from her sudden outburst.* "Woah! Sunny, why is she having a mental breakdown!?" *Kyle raises his voice so Sunny can hear him through Daisy's obnoxious screams.*

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"Whoa! Sunny, why is she having a meltdown!?" Kyle raised his voice to be heard over Daisy's loud screams as he quickly jumped back from her sudden outburst, ready to confront her.

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